A few weeks ago I wrote an amazing story.
I was bored and just started writing.
My story was about a dark room and there was a trap door and a guy fell down through the trap door. He woke up in a technology room.
I enjoyed writing my story.
The Dark Room
Author – Caleb Bennett
Two years ago a 12 year old boy was riding his bike down the road, and saw a abandoned mansion.
He Decided to go in, but the door was barricaded. He needed to find a crowbar, he searched around the mansion for 7 minutes. He found a little shed and the door was slightly open.
He went in, he looked around just to find a brocken down lawnmower. He spent 12 more minutes searching.
There was a nail hammered into the wall with the crowbar hanging on it! He ran back to the front door, and got the wood off the door. Then turned the door nob. There was lots of windows so he could see.
He took one step into the mansion, BOOOOOOOOOO! “What was that, he said”. He kept walking, and found the kitchen, opened the kitchen cupboard. YUUCK soggy weetbix, you know the saying, Never eat soggy weetbix.
So Danil closed the cupboard and went exploring. In the corner of the room he saw a dog house.
He looked inside but there was nothing.
Next he found a bedroom, he didn’t go in there because there was a spider! Ohhh and his name is daniel.
Daniel hates spiders it his worst nightmare.
Daniel carried on to the next room and it was locked so that means he needs to find a key.
Daniel went back to the kitchen and searched every cupboard all he could find was a poop scooper.
Then thought it was in the Bedroom with the spider!
Daniel was brave and took one step into the room, Kreeeek, the floorboard is very old.
Then saw the key hanging on a hook on the other side of room.
HE went under the bed where the spider wasen’t, got out of under the bed.
Graved the key and went back downstairs, and accidental slipped down the steps, but lucky didn’t Hurt himself. Got to the door and unlocked it, but it has no windows. This is the house every one was talking on the news. It the famous dark room with no light switchers. But lucky Danil brought a flashlight, he got it out of his pocket then turned it on and it was a bathroom, nobody has every seen except the owner. Daniel
Went in but there was a trap! He stepped and the floor open up to a slide.
Chapter 2
The Underground Base
He woke up, in a technology room with heaps of computer screens. Danil got up off the ground and opened a door to even more screens. Danil touched a button, Clink! Buzzzzz! All the lights turned on and the screens. Wow! Its a gamers dream, Its a Gaming room. Danil hopped on a seat and picked a game.
He found a game called Portal 2. It a sandbox game, Were you can go anywhere in the world but in a game, you can put portals anywhere. Danil spent 2 hours on the game, then decided to get out because his mum is waiting for him. Danil climbed back up the slide, Went back throw the creepy Mansion. Back out the door.
Booooooo! Oh that why it does that its the doorbell, got back on his bike and rid away. 2 minutes later he got lost, Oh NO Were is he…
Danil rid in to the city were his favorite food store was, and had 10 dollars left, He could get a Mince and cheese pie. 2 minutes later he finished the pie and rid his bike to his grandma’s house.
Its not finished yet.