What is going to happen this week!

On Monday is just a normal day of school, then Tuesday is pet day, you bring a pet or if you don’t you can look around the school and look at the different animals. Wednesday and Thursday i don’t know what is happening but on Friday its the big day out, the big day out is were we watch a movie and go to the pool.

I am looking forward to all of the rest of the week.

 

Writing a narrative

Yesterday i did a narrative, a narrative is writing a story with a problem, setting, character and a Solution.

 

One gloomy morning a women in yellow was exploring a forest, then she heard a “CRACK!” What was the she said? She kept walking again exploring the unknown forest. A couple minutes later she was lost. She looked around and could not see any familiar landmarks. The mist was getting thicker and the birds stopped singing. Every tree looked the same. She was starting to get frightened. 

 

The rain started to fall, She was feeling cold and wet. Her puffer jacket soaked up the moisture, it felt heavy on her shoulders. She sat down and looked through her pack looking for something to eat. 

She couldn’t find her way back, she wanted to get back, but then… She heard a group of bikers coming down the track. “HELP!” She said, the bikers came to her and helped her back to the exit.  

 

Cricket on 17th October

On Friday year 5 and 6 went to a cricket competition, there where 2 teams. I was in team 1. It was fun but when I was waiting it was boring.

I was very tired after cricket, it was extra hot because of my hat . It started rain when we got in the car! I was very lucky. Max A’s dad was our manager.

I will do it again next year! But it was a friendly game so there was no place like 1st 2nd or 3rd

Have you ever played cricket?

Resilience

This week we have had the Life Education Trust Caravan here at School.  Harold the Giraffe lives in the Caravan and is looked after by Kelly.

Yesterday we learnt about Resilience. Resilience is a word that mean you make things better, like when your having a bad day and you make it better!

We’re learning to do that.  That’s what I’m trying to do!   I’ve done it a couple of times, we also learnt so more about it with Harold.   Harold is a giraffe and hes very funny.

Do you think Harold is a real giraffe?

2024! Woodend camp

On the 2nd of September the year 5/6 people went on camp at Woodend I loved it there it was so fun! Also funny at some times.

The first day we arrived at like 2:00 to 2:30, it was a pretty long car ride. When we got to camp we had to set up in our cabins|||||||||

Then we played outside till dinner, we had dinner then got ready for bed, lights out at 8:45.

The next day we woke up and had breakfast then had our first rotations my first one was the climbing wall.

I got to the end, 1 on the hard, 2 on the easy one. I liked it but it hurt pulling myself up.

Then had lunch I forgot what we had, but after that we just played. Forgot what we did after.

Its kind of a big story so I cant write all of it.

 

I would want to go there again. it was a big week I was very tired after that.

Now I have to wait another year 🙁

 

Personification

Objective is to write a free verse poem personifying a stream.

A personification makes a non-human thing seem human.

An example of personification, the sun smiled at us. The leaves danced across the lawn.

We learnt it so we could make our writing more interesting.

I think I did a really good job. I will use it again.

Have you done this before?

 

descriptive writing

Today we went on this website and it a site were you have to describe an ai photo. then write a story of what the photo looks like. Ai will then generate a picture and give you a percent 1 to 100. 100% mean you got the exact same picture but if it doesn’t it will be something I little different.    My picture is the one on the right and the one that you had to try to describe.

St Johns

Today my class had St Johns, we learnt safety rules. First she introduced herself her name was Nikki. She taut us what to do if there, was a person how had a stroke attack, asthma attack and how to bandage somebody up. So we can save peoples lives, then we practised how to do it.

Reading

In reading we are learning to scan a text for key information and think critically about the information located. Once we  locate  the information we evaluate it. Our task was to use visual language features to create impact and meaning. My group has be learning about wasps and what they do. 

My Amazing Writing

A few weeks ago I wrote an amazing story.

I was bored and just started writing.

My story was about a dark room and there was a  trap door and a guy fell down through the trap door.   He woke up in a technology room.

I enjoyed writing my story.

  The Dark Room

   Author – Caleb Bennett

Two years ago a 12 year old boy was riding his bike down the road, and saw a abandoned mansion. 

He Decided to go in, but the door was barricaded. He needed to find a crowbar, he searched around the mansion for 7 minutes. He found a little shed and the door was slightly open.

He went in, he looked around just to find a brocken down lawnmower. He spent 12 more minutes searching.

There was a nail hammered into the wall with the crowbar hanging on it! He ran back to the front door, and got the wood off the door. Then turned the door nob. There was lots of windows so he could see. 

He took one step into the mansion, BOOOOOOOOOO! “What was that, he said”. He kept walking, and found the kitchen, opened the kitchen cupboard. YUUCK soggy weetbix, you know the saying, Never eat soggy weetbix. 

So Danil closed the cupboard and went exploring. In the corner of the room he saw a dog house.

He looked inside but there was nothing.

Next he found a bedroom, he didn’t go in there because there was a spider! Ohhh and his name is daniel.

 

Daniel hates spiders it his worst nightmare.

Daniel carried on to the next room and it was locked so that means he needs to find a key.

Daniel went back to the kitchen and searched every cupboard all he could find was a poop scooper.

Then thought it was in the Bedroom with the spider!

Daniel was brave and took one step into the room, Kreeeek, the floorboard is very old. 

Then saw the key hanging on a hook on the other side of room.

HE went under the bed where the spider wasen’t, got out of under the bed.

Graved the key and went back downstairs, and accidental slipped down the steps, but lucky didn’t Hurt himself. Got to the door and unlocked it, but it has no windows. This is the house every one was talking on the news. It the famous dark room with no light switchers. But lucky Danil brought a flashlight, he got it out of his pocket then turned it on and it was a bathroom, nobody has every seen except the owner. Daniel 

Went in but there was a trap! He stepped and the floor open up to a slide.

 

          Chapter 2 

      The Underground Base

 

He woke up, in a technology room with heaps of computer screens. Danil got up off the ground and opened a door to even more screens. Danil touched a button, Clink! Buzzzzz! All the lights turned on and the screens. Wow! Its a gamers dream, Its a Gaming room. Danil hopped on a seat and picked a game.

He found a game called Portal 2. It a sandbox game, Were you can go anywhere in the world but in a game, you can put portals anywhere. Danil spent 2 hours on the game, then decided to get out because his mum is waiting for him. Danil climbed back up the slide, Went back throw the creepy Mansion. Back out the door.

Booooooo! Oh that why it does that its the doorbell, got back on his bike and rid away. 2 minutes later he got lost, Oh NO Were is he…

Danil rid in to the city were his favorite food store was, and had 10 dollars left, He could get a Mince and cheese pie. 2 minutes later he finished the pie and rid his bike to his grandma’s house.  

 Its not finished yet.